All Comments on '44 Anonymous Valentines'

A lovely story. Shows that even in trying circumstances love doesn't have to end.

WE NEED MORE OF THESE KINDS OF STORIES. THIS MAN SHOWS A LOT OF HONOR. THE WOMAN SHOWS A LOT OF DETERMINATION. IN BOTH CASES LOVE WON WITH ALL CONCERNED.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS.

With several gallons of oversweet syrup, but somewhat lacking in flavour, this has to be one of the most innapropriate offerings I've ever seen here.

It looks very much as though originally intended for submission to a tacky magazine specialising in "romantic" drivel for the uneducated, followed by some hasty editing to add the supposedly "erotic" touches as an afterthought.

Sorry, but it really didn't work!

Get a life jerk off. If you can write a better story than this one, then do so. Otherwise go jerk off somewhere else. Well done PostScriptor good to see you writing again.

Sweet (definitely), syrupy (perhaps), sexy (in a charming way), satisfying (oh yes!). Thank you!

The first issue and the biggest for me is the idea that they would jump into a sexual relationship with every indication they intend to live together (marry?) even though they have not seen one another for 40 years.

How realistic is that? I could see their love re-ignited if they dated for a few months and found out they still had a lot in common, but the way it was written seemed too fast for any reality.

But, I did like it.

Truly, this is a darling story (no pun intended).

Excellent. Well told with good characterisation

I really did like reading this. Thank you for posting it, I even managed a smile at the 'yes dear' at the end. Great story well done.

Everything come out. Good happy ending.

Great story that had a special significance to me. Two years ago I lost my wife to Cancer, and just recently reconnected with a former girlfriend. As a Vietnam veteran I remember how society viewed unwed mothers in the 60's, so I understand your characters "sacrifice" to make an honest woman of Betsy. I hope you win.

I feel in this case be my velentine means so much more than usual.Rachlou may have edited this but it was well written by you. Keep on writing and submitting. Good luck and ciao.

Why do people want reality?? This was fun and even might happen to two very lucky people!

Well written, to a sensitve woman it brought tears.

Merci

Francine

Good read PS. I actually could feel the love flow and had a tear in my eye.

I hope this does well in the competition 5 twinklies for a job well done.

Amanda

Well written, crafted and provoked feelings welcomed and echoed.

Thank you.

I already told you I loved it, but I'll say it again anyway. It's a sweet, romantic, warm, and very "real" story.

Ps. I'm looking forward to that steak... ;)

I loved it, so very tender. <P>

Merci, <P>

PK

Sweet and hot. Good work, PostScriptor.

Syrupy, that what Valentines is all about, love between 2 people. Good Plot, nicely erotic without the ridiculous gymnastics that mar many stories. A really good story. Take it from a guy that has sent 54 signed Valentines and I think she still has every one of them

A well written story with an amazing ending. Good job and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Good luck in the contest.

You've written some of my very favorites, so it's good to see you sharing with us again.

This was a sweet story, with just the right amount of sex. My only gripe is that the transition from sharing valentines to tearing up the sheets is a bit abrupt.

Thanks, though, and hope to see more from you.

DC

Very nice tale of love and honor .. And a lesson to the young people, always ask for that dance, they can only say yes or no, that won't kill you or leave you wondering 30 years later about what could have been.

A mature story! So rare ... great to read of a couple in their later years. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

This was the first ever story I've read in the Mature category. If they are all like this, it won't be the last. Thank you. Maddie

Loved it and the tenderness between them, a darn good story.

May you find the time to write more. It is pleasurable to read such a tome, where people are important, they have stories to tell and desires to be fulfilled

A most pleasurable read.

As an older reader I can relate to the feelings of satisfaction finding true love at the later stages of life. Well developed story and good character convergence.

Thank you.

I loved it, it's a very warm and fun read!

A heart warming story. Now if they could just move away from that damn snow!

...So this old logger cried...............

A real dandy of a story here!

albeit very tardy. TK U MLJ LV NV

Lots of love. Very emotional, that's good.

I didn't think they rushed to bed. In my 50's and no time to waste lol.

I have one important question . When and where did Linda learn to speak pirate ??

Matey !

AMerryMan

All denied their true lives, and loves and yet seemed to live rather well - very fucking English LOL

Interesting how they all made the most out of their mistakes - and today people get pissed if the burger takes more than 2 minutes to arrive -

real good story how going to war can change you to help others ,good love story

and plenty story and not sex I liked it right more please I would like to chaing the score I gave to a six

What a great tale. If only reality could be as wonderful.

Thank you for a truly romantic story.

That was bloody fantastic. Well done and thank you. What a great little story.

And syrupy and spicy as well! Thoroughly enjoyable for this old geezer. However, I do think that the late 50s are a bit young to need Viagra (he says with a grin while fondly remembering his 50s and 60s).

So yes, kids, as long as you maintain normal health and fitness, you CAN enjoy rambunctious, take-no-prisoners sex well into your golden decades. Just not as often as your 30s and 40s. ;-)

Thanks very much for a fun little Valentine's romp.

Thankyou for a well told sweet little yarn.

Seniors, need and want love, Sex, emotions & companionship, TK U MLJ LV NV

I can't say much more, you got everything right. Thank you

I really enjoyed reading this story because it was very heart warming for me. Had me with watery eyes at times and smiling at others. Okay, maybe the jump into bed was a little bit too soon, but they aren't teenagers, just let it happen. Being interrupted by Sandy was priceless, just one of the times I was smiling. So very glad I found this gem, thanks.

P.S. you got me with "lave", had to look it up.

A really nice love story.

But ruined by their ages. She had no child and you made her too old to have one with George. To me it was a blown story not worth reading...3 stars

Today I read your story ... just have to say there's always one anonymous in the crowd ... didn't like it - only 3 stars ! Well too bad ... here's the other two to make it "5". Thanks for the enjoyment.

I'm a widower

My new wife,.. I robbed the cradle. She's 11 years younger than me.

We married in 2014

She was 57 and I was 68

Age is only a number!!!!

(Cialis works better and longer)

Idiot annon with the 3 star comment,

You must have taken lessons from Miley Cyrus regarding sex over 30.

At 75 I still get it up

But I have a tongue that's been training since 1964. And finger that never tire.

When the ONLY tool in your toolbox is a hammer, the whole world looks like a nail.

My toolbox is overflowing.

The Do-ing is easy. It's the Know-ing that makes everything possible

Great love story- very well written. Had a tear or two so that shows how good a story and author

great

Well Stewartb there is 2nd in the crowd, I award only ..2..stars..I really did not like it,way too syrupy. The story could have been way better if there was actually a story being told instead of more than a chapter and a half to discribe their sexual activity.Feeble attempt to tell a tale.Boring to read because there is no tale..I also feel Wasted my time.This would have been a successful tale Reader Digestised in 750 words..that's all the words needed for this submission.

catagory..

A really hot, sexy tale! Young people aren't the only ones to fall in love and have enjoyable sex together. Throughly enjoyed this one, thank you!

Nice love story. I skipped over the gratuitous sex part as I usually do. I suppose that is the price one pays for reading free stories on a sex site, LOL.