by Vlinder_Fawn
I'm enjoying the sequences. I know you've written many chapters and I've not read many of the critiques - however, I see no need for your detail about the Romans' 3 names. I do like that you only refer to them by their first names after the initial introduction. Also... be careful about naming your 'gods'.... Thor is a Viking god, not a Roman one. Small details, but this is a quasi-historical story, isn't it? I'm going onward to meet the vampires!