All Comments on '8 Balled'

That's all this is.

You need practise writing, first submission? In regards to above comment that's why it's in non consent.

What the hell do you think nonconsent is, anonymous?

Some of the action could have been a little clearer, but I enjoyed it.

there is absolutely no character development. the story doesn't make sense at all - why is there a girl, a man with a suit, and a guy called john with no capitalization working in a cellar, and why is the boss whispering Sorry at the End? maybe he's apologizing the reader

Great StOry. I Only Wish There Were More Details About The BoSs Fucking Her!

Its nice maybe you should write a sequel.