by SiobhanSaor
MORE of this story. Its different in so many ways and I love her attitude as well as theirs. Looking forward to more, 5 Stars for good tale and better writing.
Any story involving marital in fidelity deserves to be put in the trash bin.
This little lady is racing down a rabbit hole. It is a fun if totally unbelievable story.
4 Stars
I read a lot of stories on here, but I have to say that I for one, can't wait for the next installment. It reminds me of a time my wife and I had a close friend living with us, but that all I'll say about that. Great story keep it going.
I simply want to say thank you for all of the comments, I am so glad you have enjoyed this story.
For clarification, infedelity usually refers to a breaking of agreements or promises, real or perceived, in this case it is their agreement to bring in a third, ergo no infedelity. However, if you dislike the story line, please feel free not to read.
I loved it please keep going don't leave us haning and get either both parents caught fucking They're slut and have the daughter join in
and they're extraordinary! The writing is excellent, you have a wonderful grasp of descriptive language and your "array" of sexual fantasies is astounding. I love your imagination! And the direct talk does not seem at all forced; it comes naturally as a part of the shared experience. Please, please write much, much more.
I think there are a lot of ways you can expand on this and I for one would like to see what you come up with. :)
Really nicely written with no annoying euphemisms or jarring turns of phrase. Also very sexy. The weekend scenario lends itself to the hectic sexual pace. If only you could write it as fast as I can read it...
I honestly love this story and keep coming back to it. Really hoping you come back to it too and write more!
I just found this wonderfully erotic. The honesty of 3 people being upfront about their sexual needs and being brave enough to get them fulfilled is just great.
As others say, please bring on more, Siobhan, either of these three or something else - you write well