by extreme_hetro_sex
I had a hard time getting past the issues with the grammar. I think with editing this story could be a lot better.
As soon as the intended finds out that his fiancee is a slut,he'll avoid the major mistake of marrying the twat!
Altough I liked the hot and epic party in this story, let me point out a detail: as the second guy came on Cherry's face, you can not say later she had two loads on her breasts. Okay, some drops can drop down but not the whole load....
I liked the concept for the story, but some plot and character development would have been nice. It would have made it more of a story than a raw description of sex.