All Comments on 'A Bad Day All Around'

Are you shure you on the correct site? This is Literotica, which means:

Erotica (from the Greek Eros - "desire") — refers to works of art, including literature, photography, film, sculpture and painting, that deal substantively with erotically stimulating or arousing descriptions. Somehow I think your browser made an 180 degree turn

Hey, idiot

What part of erotica don't you understand??? See definitions from Merriam-Webster's Dictionary below:

erotica

Main Entry:

erot·i·ca Listen to the pronunciation of erotica

Pronunciation:

\i-ˈrä-ti-kə\

Function:

noun plural but singular or plural in construction

Etymology:

New Latin, from Greek erōtika, neuter plural of erōtikos

Date:

1819

1 : literary or artistic works having an erotic theme or quality 2 : depictions of things erotic

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erotic

Main Entry:

erot·ic Listen to the pronunciation of erotic

Pronunciation:

\i-ˈrä-tik\

Variant(s):

also erot·i·cal Listen to the pronunciation of erotical \-ti-kəl\

Function:

adjective

Etymology:

Greek erōtikos, from erōt-, erōs

Date:

1651

1 : of, devoted to, or tending to arouse sexual love or desire <erotic art> 2 : strongly marked or affected by sexual desire

— erotic noun

— erot·i·cal·ly Listen to the pronunciation of erotically \-ti-k(ə-)lē\ adverb

He correctly labeled it non-erotic. To be pissed because a story labeled non-erotic turned out to be non-erotic is a display of a fundamental inability to understand simple English, in spite of your egregious erroneous misuse of the language.

Thanks for contributing to my education. Now, may I contribute to yours?

The definition of Non-erotic, posted right next to the words "Non-erotic" reads: fiction without a sexual focus...

Since this story is fiction, does not contain a sexual focus and is clearly posted in the Non-erotic category...perhaps you are the one who should return to elementary school...

But thanks for reading!!!!!

Vet42

when you're in a crash like that going into a coma your muscles atrophies fairly quick like over some months. And it's pure hell coming back, the same goes for the tendons that also shortens up, which is even worse.. So yeah, a bad story...

I thought non erotic meant the story wasn't erotic,no matter what the site is named it has catagory's for different types of stories, I thought.

This was a good story, nice building of suspense. More like this?

I just came across this story. Well written with clear word pictures describing the cold dreary city. But I felt needed more character fleshing out.

I'm sorry, but I missed the point of the story but I appreciate your hard work.

Thanks for trying.

A crash on the ice leaving one dead and one clinging to life is certainly not the way to start your day.

Too short to score. I was just starting to get into it when it ended.

This has to be the first chapter of a continuing story. I hope. What I read seemed like a TV news report. Kinda interesting but surely there’s more to it.