by Mischiana
Very good progression of the story line. *smiles warmly* i am eagerly looking forward to reading the next chapter.
well written, very detailed and realistic. everything i love in a story. hurry up with the next chapter
Would love to see our heroine further marked by rings hanging from her nipples and labia.
Even so, I offer you my sincere thanks once more, along with another five stars.
Very well done - please keep up the excellent work!