All Comments on 'A Bartender, Drinks, and a Date Pt. 02'

It was like eating pancakes in a Vermont inn where you get real maple syrup: a little sappy, very sweet, and quite satisfying.

potentially fattening on her part? (none clarity puzzling given his felt responsibleness) He doesn't amplify her love statement and in fact quietly feels the opposite. Contrary or scared? Her previously hurtful clydsdale will emerge soon and his reticence may change to protective - then we will see how reluctant he remains.

I know there must be tangible aspects to make a story but the emphasis on her frailty was a little wearing. Perhaps as intended?

Still great reality and flow author - thanks - with Regard

More, Tony, more...please! I sure hope Nick wakes up and realizes what he has here. Good heavens, I've fallen in love with Shannon myself!

Please continue this story.

Bob from Bellevue

You had no real ending, Please!

John

tony:their lovemaking was as great as their abstinance was before! keep it going tony. Thanks from Homer:

Tony:

I can start to feel the warmth and more emotion in the writing. A good chapter. Keep it up. Thank You. Ronnie W.

In my opinion, this is a beautiful love story -- the way love should be even developing so quickly in the relationship. I agree with others that it should be in the "Romance" category since it doesn't really fit with the run of the mill "Erotic Couplings" group.

Here comes the HOT SEX! Chapter 1 tantalized us, and this was worth waiting for. Her delicate psyche as an abused woman may offer problems, but he is such a nice guy that their coupling is delicious. As a former editor of a camping magazine I really like the ploy of tent and sleeping bag in the back yard. Let the neighbors get their own! I love it.

You need an editor.

You say 'she was a good screw for some' implying she's had multiple partners, yet Jeremy was her first, and you said in the previous chapter that she hasn't had anyone since him.

nice

This story has moved from great to exceptional. So well written. Totally hooked and reading on.

soft gentle loving and caring enough to please your partner as that's where your pleasure comes from.

hmmm. some hesitation on Nicks part. yes only a couple days but... good anskt point of the story!