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"Yes George," she didn't even open her eyes.
"Will you still be here when I wake up?"
"I'll be wherever you are," she mumbled groggily.
"Promise?"
"Mmm-hmm."
Feeling slightly better but still uneasy he said, "Good night Dawn."
"Good night, I love you George."
He started to reply but then he heard her breathing turn into light snoring, like that of an exhausted puppy. After a few long minutes of listening to her rhythmic white noise, George finally closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep.
- COMMENTS
MarkT63over 2 years agoYou sir are an excellent writer. Curious what happens when Georges mother and sisters get home...
Talixalmost 3 years agoLove the sexual fantasy ability so much! I did in the original, and you did a great job with it here as well; I hope you will revisit it with other fantastic settings in future chapters. :-)
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!
sviedabout 7 years agoThere have been comments but they are all so old the system hides them by default. You can see them by selecting show more comments or show all comments. After a story reaches a certain age, and especially if it's a middle chapter in a series, people stop commenting on it. It's the same for a lot of this site.
And I agree. This is an awesome story. Better than the original. No insult or disparagement meant to Joy Brolly.
DJ
Anonymousover 7 years agoWhy there have been no comments so far. This is is really good. There are some word choice/grammar mistakes, but this is fantastic.
