All Comments on 'A Birthday Present'

by TinksNottyMomma

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MartyMBMartyMBover 5 years ago
It was great already

You didn't need the sharing part. It was great already. The sharing at the end wrecked the story. I don't really care if that's the way rich men act in your story universe. It is your story, though.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114ualmost 6 years ago
Yes!!!!!

I love just how perverted you're mind is! Thank you for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
You need to write more

Wonderfully articulated stories of beautiful love and lust. You know whereof you speak, my dear. Thank you.

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