All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise'

very juicy kina hoped the bikers would join in though after slim but this was a nice effect. keep on keepin on.

very juicy kina hoped the bikers would join in though after slim but this was a nice effect. keep on keepin on.

He is a queer that liked to see hard cocks so I rated it 1*.

her driver's license is written in hieroglyphics

Tell what planet the husband comes from ? Calling a bar gangbang of his "slut" wife as an amazing birthday for him is probably one of the dumbest fucking things I have ever read.

For me and many millions of men across the planet Earth I would much prefer a birthday present from a "loving" wife that has absolutely no cum on it from other men most of whom were strangers.

The wisest course of future action for the clueless husband would be to get a bunch of heavy duty storage bags and bag up his slut's things put them out on the lawn, take the house key off her key ring and escort her cheating ass out the door.

Not worth a reader's time.

Just a sad silly story. You write well, but your talent is wasted with crap stories as this.

Glad you stopped writing...

Do All the Husbands On This Site Like to watch other guys fuck their wives and CUM Inside ! At least teach the dumb-ass couple a lesson and have the wife get knocked up! ~ (Especially in stories where she thinks it ok to let 12 inch black cocks shoot a gallon of cum all over her ovaries!) ~ Oh,and lets start spreading the STDs around to these piece of shit wives while we're at it! ~ Marriage means jack-shit to the writers on this site!

A bunch of sad losers.

What a hypocritical plot line to advertize that only the wives could be extramarital fun the husband must be faithful!

Another LW story dear annony hates. This ass wipe needs to be barred. Gave it a 5 top help offset the 1 dear annony gives out!!

At least the description of Slim's cock was believeable, and the story is erotic even if its premise is not my cup of tea.

and she wants a divorce or a open marriage.

Wow. This is vile. Just wretched

You're no longer the King of the Closet Cucks duder, you lost your crown to the illiterate virgins who voraciously read every "wife becomes bar slut for a night" story and then in a fit of shame leaves a rancid shitpost.

Let it go dude, your day has passes, the new wannabe cucks rule this board now.

Ignore the negative assholes that just want to fuck their mommies in their closets. This was an excellent, well written story that deserved the 5 stars that I gave it!

I would love this kind of birthday scenario from my wife. Hope that you keep writing similar hot stories.

Every husband's birthday dream. Watching his wife become a whore before his eyes. A memory to cherish.

Some fucking birthday! I guess Wimpy the cuck is too stupid to realize that his slut of a wife just might leave him for Slim's BIG dick. Have to think that if this lowlife couple has children,he ain't the biological father. What will she do to celebrate her own birthday,get airtight on the pool table?!

What a wonderful wife you have.

and you a wonderful husband you are sharing your wife

With other men.

I also shair my wife with other men, and especially with our friend

I mostly watch her and our friend have sex,

Love watching her get on her knees between hid legs

Take out his long cock and suck it until he gives her a good load of cum.

.....must be the biggest fool on the planet. And the wife? The biggest slut.

Fun story. Can't help but wonder if this was in Panama City Beach, Fl.? It sounds like a bar I had been in many times.

That was a fantastic story. Loved it!