All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise Ch. 01'

That is a fantastic start to a story. Please keep the chapters coming =)

I usually don't like Romance stories as quite a lot of the time they seem like the characters just meet and fall instantly in love but I have to say I am loving the way you are slowly building theeir relationship. The raport between Simon and Emily is funny and sweet. Love your writing!

I am really looking forward to part 2.. I like the slow buildups, more 'real' and easier to enjoy.. Good start to the story, I hope the next parts come easily for you!

Love the storyline, love the character's, most of all loved the fact that no one had braless 36FF's (as if that would actually be attractive) to make up for the lack of intellect! Now I really want to know what's next!

HAHAHA I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! It had me smiling the whole time!!!! PLEASE continue!!!!

It was funny. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks.

This really is an amazing start to what is going to be a great story. i cant wait to read the rest.

I was entertained!

I really hope that MsJenn gets the next chapter up soon! I really loved the first one and cannot wait for the next part of the story

Great start! Really hope you continue this one, can't wait to see what happens next

I too hope you continue this story!

This is my second time reading this story and it is one of the best I've read on this site in a while. I really hope you continue this series. Please write more!

I mean it's so original, the idea, and everything behind it. The characters make me smile nonstop. I absolutely adore this and pray you continue the stories. Great job & I gave it 5stars. <3

this is a great story. i hope u wud continue it. one of the best so far.

this is an amazing story, &nd i hope you keep writing more.

Great story. I hope you continue the story line. Simon & Emily have a great chemistry that makes you smile.

I wish to add to the chorus wanting more of this story. This is a wonderful beginning.

very cute!!

anxiously awaiting more!

More please...?

I really love this story, please write more

Dear Lady,

The irony of such a story being posted in a site such as Lit reminds me the everyone has a story. Even the people behind the pretend names on the right column of the chat room.

Have a safe and profitable week.

Greg

P.S. I would enjoy the opportunity for a conversation some time.

A very interesting take on “meeting a celebrity”. I liked it a lot, I just wish there was a chapter 2, and maybe even a chapter 3. I’m going to guess, though, after all these years, that’s not going to happen. Too bad. Thanks much, though, for what you gave us.

Very Nice

I liked this story a lot. I saw in MsJenn’s profile that she recently updated it. Just last month as a matter of fact. Hopefully she will bless us with a Chapter Two to this story. I know from reading some of the comments that a lot of people would really like to see a second chapter. BTW, Five (5) stars for this one.

Beautiful story.