by smy3th
Very descriptive story, I was laughing very hard at the mental picture you drew, up until the kids came in (not cool!). But I sure would have liked to see the look in the telemarketer's face! Also, I was waiting for the fire department to show up after the smoke alarm went off!
Pricelessly funny! Woke my sub I was laughing so hard. Keep up the good work!
A wild alternate ending. Mr. Smyth has done himself up proud as well as tickle the hell out of his reader's funny bones. I loved this story as things went wildly out of control. Loved the telemarketer phone call. Great Read. Lottsa fun!
Much better thatn Part I
Wonder how it would read if both were fused.
Too bad a stranger didn't track her down and avail himself on her charms while she was postin while alone
.was looking forward this part after the hot part 1. this was more true to life as I found out raising 7 kiddos. the first part was HOT HOT HOT!