by Lavared
if the situation is as effective going from menacing to benign, Not that I wanted her to torture him, it just seemed the entire perspective changed as the story unfolded.
Thre were some loose ends, and it seemed no more special with her than with the others. Overall, it was entertaining.
Totally impressed with your talent and imagination from the foundation up. More please - thanks - with high Regard
This was one of the best, most satisfying stories I've read on Literotica. Brava!
Great imagination and fantastic writing. One of the best stories I've ever read!
This story was super cute. It had an original concept and an interesting mystery and a sweet conclusion.
Wow, Holy hot dang! I just read this entire series and Whoa, I've been lurking around this site for a while now and yours is definately one of the best, if not THE best I have read thus far.
A really good story, well written. Just that I miss some moral implications and it had just been perfect for me.