by Ford2020
Oh my gods, rhis is one of the hotrest stories on here, honestly. <3
Question is...
Where can I find me a Mike?~
I hope you plan to write more about Buzz and Mike. Interesting characters!
Nice. I liked the way you had him and us seduced into the deal and then gave it a small twist in the end.
Really liked the story and the characters. Hope there are more chapters coming!
Convulated, complex, and sad. Mike deserved a love true, real that would lead him out of his dead end 'career'. Instead he gets scammed by some young con man whose sole purpose is to help Mike further that so called 'career'. Your dialect leaves a lot to be deserved, is there something developmentally wrong with Buzz? Is he physically unable to say the word Uncle or does he think it cute for a 21 year old who supposedly went to college to use the term Unca. If you're excuse is he is southern that is an insult to every Southerner on the planet.
I really liked it. But I think the kid should come clean before his uncle tells on him, but time will tell. Besides I think he only won the fight because the older guy let him.
The ending was so abrupt that it suggests there would be ANOTHER page to finish off. But alas.
No such thing!
I thought for a moment that perhaps it was a recent story and I could hope that an additional chapter was forthcoming in the relative future. But alas.
Not at all!
Checking the authors page showed me how wrong that thought was. This story was written in 2014. I am writing this in April 2020.
Don't get me wrong, I am certainly one to appreciate the short and to the point one-off story, but this could have been such an interesting read.
I was expecting the seduction to be a plot, but I was pleasantly surprised that it was romantic and not exploitative from the start! Also, the last line was hilarious.