All Comments on 'A Boy In Babeland Ch. 04'

That was a awsome story dude cant wait to see more...

Keep it up. Getting better all the time!

Fantastic story, hope you can KEEP IT UP..

I loved all 4 chapters! Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.

This series of stories is just spectacular!!

This is simply an awesome series, I know life creeps in periodically but still "hurry up with the next installment", LOL, Now that you have a captive audiance, DON'T STOP NOW. I've got to see what happens next.

Great stories...I always masterbate to them and imagine my older sisters fucking me.

It's brilliant mate! You've got your writing style sorted and settled and are just going great with it. It's progressing as I hoped! I await the next part!

Mind blowing simply mind blowing keeping 'em coming!

You are a brilliant writer...I have loved all four chapters so far, I read one chapter a night and just can't wait to get to the next one!

I would have preferred not the see the threesome at the end. I would have liked to have seen April and Lee finish, then Dawn arouse Lee again, with maybe April being the cheerleader. Still quite incredible.

ha ha ha ha two chicks at the same time, now that is dude heaven but it would be awesome if he got to have sex with all of them at the same time. Dude heaven.

this is by far the best series ive ever read from virgin to mac