All Comments on 'A Boy In Babeland Ch. 09'

I still can't believe, in a house full of women, this clowns mother is never around

I've read the other stories and this is one of the better ones. The addition of spanking brought this to a whole other level. Very good. I'd only suggest the author spend a little more time proofreading to clean up the minor spelling and grammar mistakes.

awesome story but when is lee gonna get with the others and his mom? we need more more more please.

ok i read this story like 2 weeks ago another story is due by now.

wow it took me 4 days to read it all and i loved it but i think it needs some more you need to keep on with the story. heck even i had an ide get lee to get the rest of them knocked up. and i want to know if there are any thing else you can make it more kinky or even hotter. i hope to see more.

Having the 2 sisters get it on didn't do anything for me, but the rest was still hot. Lee's orgasm combined with what Stephanie felt was a little better in description this time, so nice to see the improvement. Still could use a little more, I think and that would really finish it off well.

Why did you go to spanking? Your stories are execellent without crazy sex. Aside from your spelling/editing.

what about Stacy she might be pissed to here that

The whole April-Stephanie connection is odd and out of place. It seems to be forced, and it doesn`t add up in your description of Stephanie as a character. It would be a benefit for your story to leave that out, or tone it down quite a bit. To me it actually ruins the structure of the story and makes an unbalance according to earlier descriptions. Without this part of the story the rest of it is really good.

great story looking forward to reading the rest.

A lot more spelling/word issues in this one...

Heck, why the hell would I want to move out of the house when all my sisters want to fuck me all the time?!? Screw that idea, lol!

Don’t understand why you put April and Stephanie together,,, it ruined the whole thing for me

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