by espeteroh
Wow I absolutely love that series I hope you continue it I look forward to reading the next chapter
perhaps I should write some more chapters of what I was hoping for which was that cindy would order him to fuck his daughter and his daughter would be forever turned on and the three of them would stay together and his daughters lust for her father would grow more and more as she hungered for what only her daddy could give her... or something like that!
as it became obvious that his daughter was in to girls as well as his cock...would have love to read more about how the relationship develops between the three of them and getting them both pregnant...but guess that will never happen seeing it was written so long ago...pity really....
why do ppl ruin good stories of daddy daughter sex by adding another person all the time
I note that all the comments are unnamed except for one who has no works on here.I am not unnamed but I also have no works on here for I am always looking for authors with potential. Your writting lacked polish but that can easily ironed out.You were doing well with an old plot but it did have a twist to it.Then you just spoiled it all.
I liked the story right up to the point Cindy shows up, that took all the fun out of the story, what a shame.
WELL THIS WAS GREAT A LITTLE SHY ON THE ENDING BUT WAS O.K. I THINK ONE MORE CHAPTER TO STRIGHTEN THE GIRLS I LIKE TO HAPPY AND LOVEABLE ENDING,I WOULD LIKE THE GIRLS TO GET TOGETHER AND KEEP
DADDY HAPPY THATS WHAT CAROL STARTED TO DO NOW FINSH IT,,DO THE RIGHT THING AND GIVE YOUR FANS A HAPPY ENDING,I LIKED THE SEX PART ON IT AND IT WAS ALMOST LIKE IT COULD BE A REAL LIFE ROUTINE FOR SOME DAD AND DAUGHTER OR STEP-DAUGHTER YOU DID A GREAT JOB OF THIS STORY AND I GIVE YOU 5 STARS PLUS ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,''R''.....................................
I loved your stories in the series very much. They are so hot! Please keep up the great work! Looking forward to Ch. 5!
This story just kept improving! Chap. 4 was the best of all. It had everything but anal. (Hey, maybe that'll be in Chap. 5!) Great job! Keep writing!
This is turning into a great series so please don't let it finish there
leave cindy out, she messed the whole thing up. besides she is a slut, and not in a good way. she reminds me of the kind of girl who has aids and everything else from being around the block (10 times)!!!!!!!!!!
i wish cindy had not come into the equation, but even so, it is turning out a really good tale, there must be further chapters to come. i can't believe carol left it so long between shagging her dad, surely she was totally hooked on sex after the second encounter. loved it all the same
I wish she would call him 'daddy' tho.... for whatever reason, I like that. Maybe because that's what I call my Daddy?!
Thanks for a wonderful story, I'm gonna read em all! *Rechargeable batteries!*
Very impressive story, I enjoyed how simple yet involving it was. Well done!
Wow, what a turn on. Would love to be part of the group
Daughter and now the slut from next door. Who will it be next? Great story so far.