All Comments on 'A Broken Family Ch. 03'

I keep hoping that Eli beats the shit out of JT and Alex. Jt needs his head bashed in and Alex has some real issues.

The only worthy of her is Eli and if your story puts her with either of the other two asshats I will stop reading it. My sister and I had a smiler relationship to Eli and Holly but never went had any sexual relations. Alex is just jealous and JT is a fucking prick.

Can't wait for next chapter. Each one loves her and she loves them.

Getting tedious now. Waaaay to repetitive and the immature behaviour from all characters except Eli -and that includes the sister, is getting tiresome. Not sure I'm looking forward to anything actually happening here.....

Looking forward to the next chapter, how soon do you think you can have it up? ;)

I wish the whole story was already posted because I can't wait to see how it unfolds.

Love this story when can you post the next chapter:)

Ohhh god!!!! i cant wait to see what is going to happen! I wish it was all here, im gonna be crazy waiting for a next chapter! !SIGUELA!

I'm loving it! I'll try not to go crazy waiting for another update :)

Omg I absolutely love this story! When is the next chapter gonna be up? Please hurry!

If she has to choose one, I hope it's Alex and not Jt.

They move to a new town. Holly marries Alex! All 4 have consensual sex! Holly says only one child per brother! My idea, anyway!

I should have known, this site is big on non consensual sex that is rape nothing more. I don't need to read any more of this trash!!

I'm not quite sure what you believe "rape" means, but I assure that there is not any non consensual sexual intercourse in this chapter. Best of luck to your prudish mind since this is an erotic fiction website.