All Comments on 'A Broken Family Ch. 07'

I can't wait for the next chapter! Love this series please let her and Alex be together while camping please

I've been checking for updates everyday and when I saw A Broken Family 07 my eyes lit up. You have a great style of writing and I love how you don't rush the story I can't wait for chapter 08, I want to see how JT and Holly's relationship progresses and how Alex and Holly connect on the camping trip. All in all I would like to see Holly give her vaginal virginity to JT but I know that is up to you the writer. You are truely an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more stories from you.

Good writing, but you killed it for me when you allowed the male whore of the family to have her first and not the one that she appears to want to really be with.

Please just figure out a way for all of them to be ok. I know it's probably impossible because they are all in love with her. It would just nice to have a happy ending every now and then. Real like definitely falls short so maybe you could help me. Fingers crossed.

Love the story so far keep it going.

I love the story, please try to give us a little of happiness giving us more of this amazing story, and please try to write the chapters a little longer. It crazy how obsessed with this story i am.

Hope you upload soon, ADIOS

I have a bad feeling that JT or Alex will find out about the other.

Please upload next chapter soon! I can't wait for this steamy camping trip. Your story has me hooked! When will chapter 8 be up? And will it be longer?

It will be up sometimes this week. I typically upload 10-25 pages from Microsoft Word; I can't control how long it appears on here.

I absolutely adore this series and check daily for a new set... I hope that its a very long series. The build up is awesome and never fails to get me hot.

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I wish you would have spent some time on Holly and JT!

Im glad to see Holly is breaking down the uptight Alex's over-protectiveness. Cant be denied!

I've been checking for updates everyday and when I saw A Ch 07 my eyes lit up. You have a great style of writing and I love how you don't rush the story I can't wait for chapter 08, I want to see how JT and Holly's relationship progresses and how Alex and Holly connect on the camping trip. All in all I would like to see Holly give her vaginal virginity to JT cuz I prefer him and think he needs her more but I know that is up to you the writer. You are truly an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more stories from you. I. Can't wait to see the reactions when JT and Alex find out about the other DRAMA . Though I can see why she's going to 2 brother it's the best of both worlds romantic from 1 and rough and ready from the other. Update soon please

when I started reading i just wanted the hot and steamy stuff to happen but I'm totally loving the drawn out tension between them. Great writing, can't wait for more!

I love the series and can't wait until you post part 8. Any idea when?