All Comments on 'A Brother's Duty Ch. 3'

Are you going to write about Di having the baby and Di and Larry possibly getting married to each other or will leave her and the baby afterwards?

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga

Thanks so much for really good love story. I'm not sure it is in the right category, but it sure is a fine story.

Thanks for a delightful story or love and caring... Of helping another in the most intimate fashion allowing the participants to share and further their relationship.

I'd like to hear more and know they had that child and shared even more!! A beautiful story.

When I think about it, I guess that is good ending. However, it did feel like it needed more.

Actually the story was far too short to be more than 1 chapter.

Still gave it 5 Stars!

I was getting into the brotherly thing until the second cancer. He doesn't visit his little brother? Tony dies and then that night the wife who is crazy about Tony wants his brother? Then the next day they forget about him and fall in love together?

No I don't buy this at all. I suggest you rewrite it. It was really good to that certain point then it just took a nose dive.

You wrote with great care and love in your heart, you made me feel and cry of the brotherly love and honour

The ending would have been good if there was time for love to grow between the two.

the brother was still warm and they were fucking. there should have been time for the new relationship to grow.

I'm with Anon. You blew it. They forgot.about Tony way too soon. Lost the heart of your story.

I don't agree with some of the sentiments below. To me, this was part of how they were grieving the loss of the brother/husband. He, knowing he was terminal, set them up to take care of one another, after he was gone. It was a beautiful arrangement from a loving heart.