All Comments on 'A Brother's Revenge Ch. 02'

so when does son do uptight momma?

great

ha ha haa, glad you tore that bitch up. I liked your story was fun with out trying to be so realistic you lose the ability to have fun with it. good job thanks

This was a great erotic satire...You would do well to write for the porn industry.

i think its time for the mother to get pounded don't you.

i loved it please write more maby the mom should get a good fucking or maby there should be an orgie:D

Poor writing, bad editing and terrible plot. Totally unrealisic!

i liked your story

i didn`t read it as a pofessional writer,

i read it because it was amusing.

very well writen by the way .

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Her husband who had made his fortune developing skyscrapers looked at his trophy wife. She might be a stuck up and aloof snob be it sure made him feel good to be seen with her.

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Damn, thats gotta suck! You'd think if he just wanted a trophy wife she would be more amiable, lol! Hope he has a good prenup, heh. Time to upgrade!! Hell, you'd think, as a trophy wife, knowing you were one, you would have a much better personality!

When I win the lottery, my public mistress will be a real sweetheart! Hehehe :)

...man I'm getting a kick out of this story! :)

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Better a broken ass than a broken bank account.

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Aaah, the stressful lives of the rich and famous;)

...and loved the story, lots of over the top fun and entertainment!!

Siskel and Ebert would have given two thumbs up! Hehe.

While I'm usually a strong proponent for lots of lube and stretching when it comes to anal sex, I'm thinking with the exception of the girl who was in love with him, he should have stuck it to all of 'em like he did the bitchy mayoress! I mean, you know it's wrong, but you just get that sense of deep down satisfaction when he rams it to her! Lol.

Thanks for the awesome story!! Another chapter coming?? We surely have to get dear ole dad a set of stainless balls, then dad and son tie prissy self righteous mom to the bed and stick it to her good all night long! I thought she might get hers this chapter. Oh! Any payback (besides them losing their girlfriends) coming for the jocks that beat on him?

L like this, room for more ,mom,preachers wife, Mandy's mom on and on keep it coming,

The L should be an I

Stopped reading when father joined.

Ok satire status achieved. Laughed all the way through. You took the worst of the frequently used “Dear Penthouse” fantasies and shoved them all together in one hilarious fuckfest.

Stopped reading this when the father joined in 2⭐️