All Comments on 'A Cabin By The Lake Ch. 02'

by desertkat

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mBrowmBrowabout 16 years ago
Very sexy

Yours is a very engaging story, well thought out, and quite erotic. The writing is very good, but would benefit from an editor to help correct a few grammatical errors, homophones, etc. Please keep writing; I enjoy the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice and hot!

Nice and hot! Cosy. Well written.

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