All Comments on 'A Caged Songbird Ch. 01'

I'm intensely curious about how this story will go :) Nice start, and interesting character :)

*smiles*

Very interesting beginning..... Please continue Mari's tale and her journey with her new Master.....

Some more of the boundaries of your world. What else can live alongside her.

I enjoyed this first taste of this world, and look forward to reading more.

Yes, tell us more! This could go so many ways :)

Your not going to leave us hanging I hope. nice 1st effort.

Congrats on becoming a Literotica author!

Great first story, can't wait to read the rest.

Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

An very original story. Please continue.

I've been on literotica for only a few weeks, first as a guest and now as a registered member: this is BY FAR the BEST story I've seen! I'm onyl on chapter one but the descriptions, the character-portrayal, the action, the setting (which could go with more fleshing but y'know that's ok its only chapter one and everything else was fantastic my mind can make up the rest (I'm imagining it in Baldur's Gate II: Shadows of Amn fyi it was the circus and the wings that did it).

Best. Writing. I've. Seen. On. This. Site!

What a great story. Love it.