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Click here"We'll have some time to ourselves, Bill. I promise. I want this to work for us too. I just want to go a bit easy for a while until we get to know each other again. I remember that very first night when we made love, Bill. You were the one who told me that we needed to take the time to know each other. You wanted a love like your parents have. I remember that as if it were yesterday," she said quietly.
Bill reached out to her and took her hand as he drove carefully through the subdivision streets. It was the gentle squeeze that acknowledged Zena's truth. He smiled to himself. The notoriously cautious man had thrown his caution to the wind and had no regrets whatsoever. Everything was going to be just fine. This time he was certain.
- COMMENTS
servant111over 2 years agoWow. You really left this story hanging…. You left him with a lesbian who.had deceived and betrayed him prior to the second psycho bitch wife. Soooo I guess you just got sick of the mess that this last installment had become threw all of the remaining story fragments into a 52card pickup and walked away.
Sad..:very sad your readers deserve better. Like a total rewrite of the last installment
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWell... it looks as though Bill is a dysfunctional female magnet... if he thinks Zena isn't another heartache and pain coming around to bite him again he has another sad awakening coming... she deceived and lied to him long-term in the beginning... she is either bi or lesbian, a dysfunctional sexual aberration.... she finds an extremely abusive man to have a relationship with after she loses her lesbian lover and then Bill comes along and rescues her... she's a real winner... he's a perpetual loser.
Grimmerabout 3 years agoNot a bad little series even if the ending felt a bit short.
Appreciate it.
Thx
Rancher46over 3 years agoWas a good story until the end, not really a conclusion. just left a reader wanting more and up in the air
Torgauabout 4 years agoI wish you had ended the story before this submission, which subtracts from an otherwise decent story thread. Bill strikes me as a guy leaping from the frying pan into the proverbial fire. Given his miserable luck with women, I'd wager that his new romance with an old flame is bound to crash and burn.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis was probably your worse series Ive read so far. Couldnt even feel sorry for bill when he kept making stupid choices and for him to end up with one of the ex whores who chose her lover him, really? And only because her lover died!
