by ingarlm
Your stories rock. Really like the romantic and erotic storyline. Imagination and anticipation make for breathless moments . I have had a few reading. Look forward to your continuing the story.
I usually don't leave a comment unless it is the final or climatic chapter but I feel the need to tell you how amazing your story is! Please please please keep it up, it is truly spectacular.
for another great chapter. I love your stories but now i just wanted to tell you that the lenght and the content of this chapter were just perfect. I dont remember when something i read left me with such a great feeling.
Such a wonderful piece... Again. This one just makes me feel so warm, cuddley and loved. Its got the wow-factor... Cute, if thats what you can call it. I was probably looking goofy sitting with this huge smile one my face the whole time. Thank you...
Cat
This chapter was as good as all the others I've read from you. This is such a sweet and romantic story and it leaves me feeling satisfied and happy :) After reading A New Life, I never thought Mark would be so romantic...
Not my usual read, but have to say I love this story its very romantic. Please keep writing you have a beautiful way with words.
Trust............hummmm.... an interesting issue for all life levels.
Something very precious, but often taken for granted and callously
tossed away without thought. Interesting sub-point the author
makes without pushing your nose in it. Charlie is justified in his suspiciousness
of Mark's behaviors, past and present.
One has to be aware of the value of TRUST in order to demand
it in relationship.....any relationship.
When you have given it and had it violated once or repeatedly;
you lose the willingness to try again. Loss of trust impacts
large. So the question of when to trust depends on you.
i love looking at hot guys with a nice bulge , i am always looking . like to day in the super market morrissons , i was eyeing a guy fucking hunk of a guy and his asked what i was looking at and i said him . i said he was dishy and sexy. i thought i was going to get punched till he smiled. then he said sorry but i am straight. my reply was so was my husband .when i met him. that was 18 years ago. i did say he was hot , no harm in looking at a straight who had a massive hard on when he walked away lol...
Your character development is wonderful. You set up the chase beautifully. I'm glad you chose this forum for the story.