All Comments on 'A Changing Script Ch. 02'

I was not expecting either of the twists in the story.

The yougnest daughter joining in and the husband joining in.

Blew my mind. Please write some more stories!!

When I read the title, I was expecting that Dad would explore some homosexual activity, but I enjoyed the story anyway.

And I like your story lines.

Rudy

I loved the wedding present with the daughter and her new husband i about cried to see the dad being invited to be with them.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

You learn quickly! Great job. Keep writing, I really enjoy this story.

That was hot. Never read such fucking around. Pretty good.

Hope should visit home and join her dad, Faith and her husband Marc in a foursome. Marc would be extatic to be fucking his sister in law right in front of the family.

Dad should impregnate Faith infront of her husband followed by Hope. They both deserve to carry his babies

EXCELLENT,

Plenty of good straight incestuous and anal action, with both daughters.