All Comments on 'A Changing Script Ch. 03'

The story was lovely. Theloving between the couples made me envious.

Keep writing.

pete35

So I read a story about a guy and married daughter reading a story about a guy and his daughter, and we are all getting off big time doing it...wait who are you and why are you watching me stroke myself? Whats next Rod Serling standing in my bedroom?

dear me, how kinky and perverted, loved every line of it.

Thankyou so much.

Who is Jennifer?

may not be unethical, but it's cheating all the same.

two story in one. but its the same story.......

Loved the way you incorporated the two stories! Great job. Keep it up!

very clever and well written,a story within a story...a technique that always produce a great read...

Great Job in incorporating 2 stories in 1

A very clever use of chapter one to start a second story, two for one.