All Comments on 'A Christmas Gift Ch. 02'

I feel honored to have read this amazing story first it was a wonderful read

Intimate, sexy and written with the detail of an accomplished writer. Thank you.

Real in the sense of a shared intimacy the reader can believe in. Author has a polished command of the language, sets a mood and style with it and delivers prose that arouses the senses both erotically and emotionally. Bravo.

Looking forward to the next chapters in this series.

So, is she pregnant, or isn't she? Don't leave us wondering - give us more!

another good story can't wait for the next chapter.

One of the things I like best about your writing is the use of small details to give the story a very "real" feeling... which for me, makes it very erotic.

I'm so delighted by the reaction to this little story. Thank you all from the bottom of my demented little heart. You have truly made 2012 a wonderful year for me.

Here's to even better things ahead in 2013!

B

Just read this little tale again and agree with wdelander that details make the story. I could just about feel that cooling, damp washcloth wiping in the hair around the base of my penis. Please continue.

I enjoyed the hell out of Part 1 & 2. Thankyou.

I always read anything that you write. You never disappoint. I've said it before and I'll say it again. It irks me when writers give characters huge breasts or baseball bats for cocks. You don't do that. Always leaving it to our imagination. The sex is written without being graphic. More?

Incredible! Look forward to part 3!

Sister Jennifer has just made the ultimate decision of love for her carnal incestual partner, lover and possibly joint parentage brother, Frank!!!

There has been no details nor discussion about Frank's nor Jennifer's significant others (spouses), but as the tea leaves now indicate, maybe brother and sister will setup joint housekeeping and familial responsibilities! Hope springs eternal.

It says they kissed in the first one but here it says they didn't cross that barrier. It doesn't match.

You are very attentive!

B