All Comments on 'A Christmas Surprise'

Good Story line. Could stand another chapter. I would love to see more of this. Good Quality writing and a good story line. It's a winner in my book.

I liked how you set up the initial sexual tension between these two, and how they followed through with their desire. The experimentation thing was nice. MMMM.

If a gorgeous young woman was coming on to me, it wouldn't matter how much I knew about her, or if I'd EVER seen her before, I'd jump right in bed with her! Great story j3zza, and nicely told. Keep writing.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really hate when writers post less than half a story. this needs more background, more buildup to sex and a good end. what happens now do they transfer to the same college? do they ever do it again? do the parents find out? does she get pregnant? half a story is worse than no story at all either finish it or delete it but don't leave it like this.

but I would love to read more

I would love to read more

very hot, 5/5