All Comments on 'A Clichéd Love Story'

I wonder how they will survive each other.

Boyd

Sweet and hot.

A lovely little story.

Well done.

I enjoyed reading your work. Your development of the plot was the key, along with the evolution of the characters.

I'm gonna keep an eye on your work in the future! I love it when two stubborn people meet... Instead of having a stupid chick throwing herself at a guy, here the chicl makes him fight for her!! Very HOT!!

Good plot, good writing, appropriate use of dialogue, real people to who one can relate. Excellent Job! I will be looking for more of your work! It is a refreshing change of pace!

Best regards,

C

This is an excellent well written erotic story. Hope to see more.

I liked it a lot. I look foward to reading more from you.

Marvelous! I love the build up. The characters were well defined. I felt like I was right there with them the whole time. Thanks so much for a marvelous story. LF

This was arousing entertainment with dry humor abound. Very strong work author and very much appreciated.

I / we hope for your efforts at interval.

With High Regard

Their hate then passion was intense. Their desires overwhelmed not them but the rest of their colleagues. The three move seduction was original. Loved the ending romance.

That was outrageously clever and sexy. I'm much impressed - completely loving it. Another author to add to my favourites, I think.

At least their friends knew what was really going on between the two of them! It's good that they finally realized it also. Excellent read! Thanks for sharing it!

One of the best on Literotica.

I'll be back again and again.

Thanks

This is far out the best I have been able to read. I know it deserve's a sequel to it. Please!

wow. great story. so funny and sweet. haha kinda reminds me of how me and my bf got together. less violence though.. hahaha thanks! that was great!

That was interesting AND hot.

Good job!

Great story! Pls more!!!!!

This is one hell of a story, your Majesty.

fucking ain't romance.

Working my way through your work and loving it!

I liked it a lot. I personally think it ended a little too quickly. I would have enjoyed seeing their relationship grow, see how things turned out "the day after", so to speak.

Still, I believe it's worthy of 5 stars.

I enjoyed this until the 3 moves part, which was so unrealistic. I assume with the name Boadicea you're female, but that part was like a teenage boy's idea of pleasuring a woman. Perhaps you are built in such a way that you can enjoy having someone's fingers thrust into you without foreplay and any clit stimulation, in which case fair play to you. However from my experience and those of my friends, this would not be pleasurable.

Loved it.