All Comments on 'A Cloak of Lies Ch. 02'

Glad to see you posting again and glad to see this story again. I love it.

Love the raw emotion between these two. So glad this story is back. I forgot how fiery these two are!

so much of a typical male ego...,no matter what they do to u still they expect u to be thankful and nice to them and no matter how many days they stayed away from u still demand to have an authority over u.....thair love is always so authoritative......but anyways the beginning seems a start of a good story...........

Move the story along. A third chapter before you provide any exposition and I don't bother reading any more.

Please kill the basterd.

I enjoyed Chapter 2 ... The rough, frustrating sex in he car was well described, and a nice read ... I'm looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds! Thanks, David.

She thought he was dead. Why wouldn’t she be with a new man. Odd plot home

You seem to specialize in writing stories about violent male rapists forcing their way onto strong females.

Not my cup of tea.

I will vote with my feet.