All Comments on 'A Cloak of Lies Ch. 06'

Wonderful to see how this story is progressing. You still have the 'bad' habit of leaving me wanting more when it ends. Please keep up the great work. Your writing is fantastic. A real pleasure to read.

Arrogant, childish, selfish, petulent, olfish, insensitive, clueless, narrow minded, selfcentered, ass bag. Would any woman put up with this from ANY man? If this is what passes for romance to a woman then she deserves to be with that kind of person. The writing is well done but the story line is making it difficult to keep reading. anon jerry