All Comments on 'A Cock in the Hand Ch. 04'

Hooray! I was worried this would be another unfinished series on Literotica.

I have to say, the way you build the sexual tension and passion is incredible. I usually try to find some little bit of constructive criticism in my comments but I'm having a hard time finding any.

I didn't go back and re-read the first three chapters, but from what I remember, I was hoping you would try to develop some kind of romantic plot. Sex is great but I find erotic stories to be so much more satisfying if there's some other kind of connection than just lust.

And i say that affectionately...Just as hot as the previous chapters if not hotter...and this new guy mystery guy with the blue eyes...whooo...just waiting for that one!

And i say that affectionately...Just as hot as the previous chapters if not hotter...and this new guy mystery guy with the blue eyes...whooo...just waiting for that one!

If you don't I think I may just cry. This story is sooo good. And I wanna see if Brian ends up with Chad, or if the peeping tom comes back into the picture, or maybe Brian's jealousy becomes too much for him, and he exposes Chad to the public. There are so many questions, and only you can answer them. So please do.

Plaese dont just leave it there. This story is too good to be yet another unfinished series. Please please please keep writting.

Ok I just read this and it was so hot and so good and it's 2009 and there's no continuation! OMG! Wherever you are come back and give us more!!!!!!!!!!

Please write some more of this story!! Writing "to be continued" and then not writing more is just SO WRONG!! I would love to read more!!!

please