by CaveCat12401
Nice. Very nice indeed. Your style is easy to follow, erotic, and I would definately like to read more.
A great read. Style is great, character development is neither to little our too much. The adding of details as the study goes on is perfect. The story itself is one that makes me wanting for more.
Extremely well written, especially like the description of the kisses, had my nether regions ;-) twitching.
Very well written.
Bi Guy here but love the cock thirsty first person.
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I enjoyed it. Good mix of characterization, passion, and hot sex. So much better than the authors that inject no feelings into their stories and by the end you feel like you have simply been at a glory hole. Write some more for us.
I agree with all the other comment. However I would like to see you decide to go with Jamie [ your first love ] and keep Kevin on the side or bring him in for a three way. I do not think that you would be happy with just Michel and he is not open to anything else.
Why does the main character (John?) only talk with quotation marks during sex? Does he use sign language the rest of the time? Telepathy? The other characters speak with quotation marks.
again liked your excellent description of sucking cock, penetration, kissing. wow. want more.
Great start to what could really be a fun series. It's been nearly three years since you posted this. C'mon. This is hot. cp