All Comments on 'A Company Affair Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Liked it.

Good story, but I was expecting more at the end. Are you going to write another chapter. Surely she continues to fuck the boss. Let's hear it. She is good slut material. Don't waste it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
lawsuit city

boss just set himself up for blackmail/lawsuit.

all she has to say is,"he said husband would be fired if i didn't." - and bye bye his business to finance penalty.

power = coercion, even if it was never used = penalty.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Developing nicely

Story is developing nicely. I wonder what Lorri's own mental view of herself is? - Devoted wife, loving mother? In a lot a ways she is. But how does she reconcile that with screwing Jake? ('I wasn't looking for it - it just happened?') Wonder if that would work for Monty?

She's setting herself up for a fall big time with Jake. He is a self-centered egotistical SOB who has no compunction about 'marking' her even though it could result in huge problems in her marriage. Obviously by getting Monty his 'promotion' he plans on continuing his activities with Lorri.

And what's with hanging on the the handkerchief? She can't empty the trash? Or does she subconsciously not want to get rid of it? Lorri is bored and needs a job. She'll really need one if Monty tosses her butt out after he finds out!

Love the ending! Tender breasts...hmmmm. Wonder if Monty has had a vasectomy?

fregen

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Category makes no sense

The category this story is put in makes no sense for the story that is written. Adjust it to the correct category if possible

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
Good Business Practice

Where it lead to since there is belief that Jake may have had something to do with Monty's promotion. I can see them going to other parties and Jake getting that cunt again. There is always talk about men being led by the little head between their legs, what about women who get stessed by a dick larger than their husband. whom they have been fucking for 17 years. Strangethings are brewing.........

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
Good Business Practice

Where it lead to since there is belief that Jake may have had something to do with Monty's promotion. I can see them going to other parties and Jake getting that cunt again. There is always talk about men being led by the little head between their legs, what about women who get stessed by a dick larger than their husband. whom they have been fucking for 17 years. Strangethings are brewing.........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
true to form

we all know whats next... jake will move in for more control... every night her hubby is gone jake will be fucking her... why not sue him for coercion instead amke her be what 99,9 percent of women are not the slut you make them out to be.... or when her hubby finds out which always happens at some point in time ... have him kick lakes ass... a big dick does not a mna make ... in fact all it does is make them think they are gods gift to women ... do this story right and let the married people in it show some balls

ryu77ryu77about 19 years ago
Interesting.....

That she didn't rid off the handkerchief right away. I hope it serves a purpose later on.

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Nice but

Good story but its easy to tell where its going. Now Jake has control because of the promotion and will see its taken away if she dosen't continue to fuck him. She says she is going it for her husband and continues to have the affair behind poor hubby's back making him a cuckold and the joke of the company. When in really a normal wife would not have cheated in the first place. And the hubby would rather have a faithful wife that the promotion in the first place. Most of these stories make men and women very stupid.

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Nice but

Good story but its easy to tell where its going. Now Jake has control because of the promotion and will see its taken away if she dosen't continue to fuck him. She says she is going it for her husband and continues to have the affair behind poor hubby's back making him a cuckold and the joke of the company. When in really a normal wife would not have cheated in the first place. And the hubby would rather have a faithful wife that the promotion in the first place. Most of these stories make men and women very stupid.

skip.69skip.69about 19 years ago
Does it matter?

Does it matter if it is possible to see where the story is going? Does that stop anyone reading it? Not me - if I read a story and like it I do not criticise, but then I do not have a small mind.

hmsandyhmsandyover 13 years ago

I like your writing and the way you are building up to what is coming next.

I know what it is but it is still exciting. keep up the good work.

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