by Romantic1
Fantastic storey, but as for the comments below the ending could have been better. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Very enjoyable if slightly unbelievable. Thought end was a bit rushed but all told 2 chapters totalling 13 pages is a good story especially with the detail and the sex scenes. 5 again
Good story, and characters but seems like it was rushed to an ending.... I still did 5 stars but the end could be better....more details
Some of your other stories involve quite a bit of incest. Will you be writing a follow-up with his daughters Kendra & Kiley joining the 5 for some sexy fun?
Kim debriefed our agents in Helsinki, then fucked them silly. Maybe you meant Kat?
I enjoyed every facet of this modern fairy tale. Your characters stand out; your plot unfolds in the exact tempo of a spy thriller reminiscent of Little Drummer Girl. I'll be the first in line to read the novel. Congratulations.
Romantic1, I want to say how much I enjoyed this modern fairytale. A well crafted lot-size of lusty adventure. All the anachronisms and blatant munchausens kept me laughing throughout your imagineering of the 80's.
I sent a comment earlier. I suspect that I signed off with the email incorrectly. For what it is worth, it is michigan_man_1958@hotmail.com
Excellent story I just hope that you do write your novel and let us all know when it will be published and the title or it
What an amazing tale - you have a rare gift of telling a story well. The more I read the more hooked I became - loved it from start to finish - The story line is so believable and the sexual tension was just right without being over the top or smutty.
Well done - look forward to reading more of your tales.
Well crafted and believeable. An adventure, a thriller and OMG sexy! When does the movie come out?