by blondeallover_00
great story!!!!!!! but made ur stuff shorter or u'll put a lot a ppl off. but it is a great story.
What a brilliant story! Apart from the sizzling sex, I love the way you word things, I was cracking up laughing at the 'horsing' around... just fantastic!
I'd love to see another story with them going the whole hog. I love them both, what fantasticly real characters!
What amazing diction and descriptive power you have! I love the blazing sex the characters had, Although I was a bit surprised that Bob and Blonde never had anal sex.
i think you should write a book....id buy it....i loved it brilliant fantastic.a man after my own heart.....jonathan...from lancashire....england.......