All Comments on 'A Cop too Far'

Good story. I wouldn't mind being nick botero!

You're definitely one of the best authors here in Literotica!

Love your stories of sexual control.

dumb story

sorry but i didn't like it

maybe it would have been better with a different ending

better luck next time

It was good from the begining, but got dumb at the end. It would have been better if Barbara was able to resist Nick and Carol. She wins over their control escape them and come back shooting lead into them.

Sorry, I go along with quite a few other readers.

for a cop who is supposedly well trained, it sure didn't take her long to crack!

The next question is, where are all the other cops? Carol the turncoat, should never be the only cop availble to help! Where was all the Blankety Blank backup? Especially for such a big drug bust?

Ann

i thought it was great...perhaps a better ending..but hey guys, let's suspend belief for a while...and go with the flow. It had me flowing ;)

This was actually the third or so story I ever read on Lit, I've been meaning to comment on it for a long time. It's one of the few stories that I keep reading again and again. You are certainly one of the best writers around. Keep up the good work.

Really, the story could be better if Nick made Barbara his queen...After all, why whnt through all the troublejust for a lackey, and beside, it'd be logical to make the mother of your child the main wife, no?

One of the best - thank you for the character development. Have just started your stories - hope you write more!

Uh to be in bed 24/7 with a big cock constantly cumming in me, and women driving me to orgasim after orgasim making me beg to be bred by that cock! Sounds like

Heaven to me!

Amazing story