All Comments on 'A Couple Pt. 01'

Read the title of the comment DUDE!!! Great characters and plots.

KEEP GOING!

I couldn't help myself from coming back to this story ... and I was so disappointed to find that I had only given it four stars when I initially rated it. This story is an entrapment vehicle - the more I read, the more I want! Believable characters with fairy-tale lives, great dialogue, and a lot of "awwwww" factor in the love that's expressed between the heroes.

Quirky writing, or maybe quirky characters, oh heck, why quibble give me more.

I really enjoyed that. A good read. I rarely give 5stars - only two or three times in the many years in which I have been reading Literotica so don't expect them for the rest of the tale! Ho.. Ho! Seriously, unlike many contributors, you write in a refreshingly "grown up" style which encourages persistent page turning. Now for chapter 2 and we'll see what your knowledge of London and England is like! Best Wishes

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