All Comments on 'A Crazy Weekend Ch. 01'

by Stargaze

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great!

Very well written, highly erotic, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
WOW

That was really hot! Stories that go on for 5 pages often run out of steam but this didn't. Hope you've got plenty of ideas for the next chapter.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 16 years ago
Hot, Hot

Great biuld-up. Great sex.

denmardenmaralmost 16 years ago
Can't wait

I love your writing.

Can't wait for the next

BillyBobJoeEdBillyBobJoeEdalmost 16 years ago
Nice Twist

Having Dad's new girlfriend bring them all together is not only genius, it's HOT!!!

thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Heaven...I'm in Heaven

Oh the joy of having that kind of a relationship day in , day out . Eating beautiful pussies every day and having lovely tits to suck on and everything else that goes with it .Your own daughter and her girlfriend and yours ...amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Amazing series!

Love the way it just keeps building. Great story in a wonderful series!

imurddyimurddyabout 14 years ago
Hot! Hot!

Hottest story I've ever read! A real nut buster!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
PLEASE WRITE MORE

Please keep writing this series.

riotpunkriotpunkalmost 10 years ago
well ??

where is 'A Crazy Summer Day' ?

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 8 years ago

I loved it! Five stars!! Just get a proofreader to clean up the spelling mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
OH-H-H-H, FUCK!!!

Damn, you are good! Now fuck me again....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
this was the best ever

I loved your story but was actually afraid and sad for his daughter when she couldnt have her father when she wanted him. Now that they are all together and Renee is turned on too I want them all to stay together forever so Melissa can have her fathers wonderful cock deep inside her whenever he or she needs it like all good daughters deserve! please let there be a sequel that ends happily ever after! as for the typos who cares the story is so realistic and well told. Its might seem bizarre to some but that is how people would react going through all those situations. please let her have her daddy some more!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very hot stories

Mmmmmm love the nipple sucking in all your stories such a turn on

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