All Comments on 'A Crowded Subway Ride'

by vanilla_breezy

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BigBeanieBigBeanieover 9 years ago
Shows promise.

It was kind of short -just starting to get into it and it was over. Also, I didn't really believe Suzana would orgasm from the fairly minimal stimulation described. I kind of wanted to know what was going on in her head to explain what happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
crap

too short... or way to long to just say she gave you a handjob

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
And...

Pointless!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Lol "And I never saw again"

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I accidentally gave it a one but it deserves a five.

Great story but i wish it was longer

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