by snowblind678
Couldn't contain myself. Made me thank god im female ;) thanks so much contiue writing you are great at it :)
The removal of all the uses of "..." and "word--word" would make it a far easier and better reading story. Just goes back to good basics of language usage for which many authors have forgotten.
that was great. i mean really keep writing and i will keep reading that is for darn sure. "daddy".
I remember my daughter prancing around in Mini's and Loose Tops. Teasing me when Mom would be at work.
This was a good story, wish my daughter was here right now to straddle my lap.
Another lazy author who uses apostrophes instead of quotations for dialog. Laziness is what it is.
Was a good story, don't worry about the grammar police.
I know what it's like to be turned on by your daughters and having sexual thoughts about them, they had no clue and I never acted on them.
I'd like to be Stacy's daddy for awhile lol
Where their love grows more. He needs to make up for all the years of neglect.