All Comments on 'A Cursed Gift'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hentai to the max!

Keep it up, hentai has no limits!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
idiot

The author is an idiot as can't even use the common standard form for some things, like "tv" so this story should be removed.

sexgundam666sexgundam666over 10 years agoAuthor
Ok...

TV, I probably shouldn't have used the full stop between T and V, but TV is an Acronym for Television, it really doesn't matter how it's written. For instance: A.K.A You must see that written everywhere, A.K.A is an acronym for Also Known As. So yeah, Bite Me! Now I'll ask this of you should you come back to this page, did you enjoy it, aside from your false accusation of idiocy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
not good

belongs in the nonerotic, fantasy or nonhuman area not incest just way to strange and poorly written.

sexgundam666sexgundam666over 10 years agoAuthor
Yeah sorry about that

I really am. Basically I started writing this and kinda got into a frenzy about it so I wrote it in all of four hours or so, which is why there are so many errors. The next part will have a lot more effort put into it.

stealthgundamstealthgundamover 10 years ago
5 stars (*****)

Great, great, great...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Liked

Enjoyed your story. More!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!

This is great! Could you publish more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more

I'm curious to see what happens next!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!!

More more more more :). Ignore the haters, this is awesome!

sexgundam666sexgundam666over 10 years agoAuthor
Part 2 is coming!

That's right as soon as it's approved part 2 will be here. Glad to see so many people enjoy this despite the numerous errors, part 2 has minimal errors by the way. Word of warning it's a lot shorter.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

Very strange story, no I/T that I can see. I suppose that's in part 2. If a story has a second part, label the first one accordingly. She does sound kind of cute though, one of those sleek Goths. I've always thought it was funny at how many lesbians seem to use dildos. Makes you wonder how "gay" they are if they use them. You never hear about gay guys using toy vaginas.

gemman1gemman1over 10 years ago
Good Story

Why name it a curse? It is a good story overall. Keep writing and I look forward to part 2 next. By the way, don't be afraid to develop the story for more pages and character development. You have the makings of a good writer, keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
CRAP

What a load of SHIT

TheLesbianDaughterTheLesbianDaughterover 10 years ago
@Anonymous

Da fuck you mean a load of shit? This is a great story, if you don't like what's in it don't read it. I think this story is fantastic.

BlackWolf505BlackWolf505over 10 years ago
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totally awesome,few errors,dont care lol not a big fan that shes only gay,but love that she can do whatever she wants with her powers. overall,super awesome story,want to see a hell of a lot more. Idea: chronicle the pendant's story throughout its previous owners as stand alone stories? kinda like witchblade lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good

Really liked it. A few misspellings​(I am a jerk about that, sorry😁) , but great quality. Will enjoy the rest if the series(probably). It's nice to find GOOD futa/dickgirl/shemale tentacle anything.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Always one of my favorites, if youre still writing please come back and write another chapter to this series!!!

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