by 2Xwidderwoman
One of my fave submissions on the site. Descriptive, sensual, HOT and Henry is so tender - he treats her like a queen. More, please? Would love to see more of the story between these two. I noticed that you didn't really describe the two of them - was this because you wanted to focus on the emotions and act? As I said earlier, the tenderness in the story is beautiful.
Hello again, Widderwoman,
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This is a great story as well. I love the stormy setting that parallels their building emotions for one another. As usual, you've done a great job of letting us feel what they're feeling. Very erotic, and very hot!
The only reason I found you was that you commented favorably on the latest story of an author friend of mine. I'm glad you did, not only for her sake, but because it sparked my interest in reading you. This is only the second story of yours that I have read, but on the strength of those, I'm going to have to read them all. Wonderful -- hot, erotic, sensuous, and yet tender. I can hardly wait to read the rest!
Oh Yessssss...
I love the sound of the thunder and to see the flash of lighting. And this story does bring back memories of my younger years. And a meeting with a young lady and her bed. Nice story, but not fiction on my part.
Thanks
Chuck
Holy crappola! That was a short and fast cart before the horse honeymoon! Oh, well, it goes with the "ghost story" type title. Thanks for another good one. Cheers!
well...it's sort of what i expect a harlequin romance to be, but i don't really know, having never read that kind of stuff...at the same time, english and grammar are ok, barring the odd misspell or typo. a major turnoff, however, was the non-stop misspelling of a really common word...the flash of light between a thundercloud and earth. it's LIGHTNING, not lightening. lightening is a word in english as well, but has no relation to atmospheric phenomena...look it up, or ask anybody.