All Comments on 'A Dark and Stormy Night'

I thought you wrote it well, there were a few grammer mistakes here and there, but nothing to be worried about. I cant wait for you to write the next chapter of this. I will be looking forward to it :)

i enjoyed this story.. Afton was reading and dreaming of Zane not knowing he was real..was unbelievable. Now that Afton knows he's real and a vampire who turned her what will become of her and Zane. What of her friends and the other vampires. Do continue writing the story it is too good. I'll just wait until the next chapter is posted.. to see how it plays out

I enjoyed this compact story that can go in soo many directions

Don't stop now please continue

great start. i'd love to see more.

more please?

Great story!! More, please!!

GREAT WORK DO ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE

That was really good you do need to write more you have so many directions you can go with this story!!

It's a little different than the other stories Ive read, but thats why I love. If u need any help let me know :D

Hot hot hot is all I can say, thank you keep going

I really like this story, very well written.

If you are able to get someone to proofread the material before it is posted that would be ideal, there were a few mistakes but they did not take away from the story and character development.

Please add to the story, I would really enjoy it if you are able to turn it into a full length novel.