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All Comments on 'A Date with Fate (Jessie's Girl)'

by Smokey125

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thruholewizardthruholewizardabout 9 years ago
wow I had to favorite this story, I laughed out loud ,I cried and I enjoyed every word .

what real love feels like to me . please please please finish this story but make it a LOOOOONG HAPPY ENDING ...... I had a great time reading this .thank you .

Stephen J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I'm Glad.....

That you gave the disclaimer up front. It saved me from the frustration of reading a

"sequel " without first reading the initial story. I may eventually read the whole series,

but for today I'll just say thanks for the warning and abstain from voting.

Avidreader3142Avidreader3142about 6 years ago
So funny...

Loved this story; Annabella Serafina Fiorello, honestly, you could sing your way through the Rome White pages and it would sound like a Puccini opera.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Not so much.

Maddie624Maddie624about 5 years ago

I thought this was really cute :)

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Writing lesbian erotica has become one of the most important things in my life. I try to make all my main characters at least reasonably three-dimensional, and balance out the Smokey Sagas between sweet, fluffy, light-hearted pieces with happy endings, and rough, sinister tale...