by Kasey18
That was one heck of a punishment....I know both of them enjoyed it.
Not only was it a selfish rape, but the daughter is 18 but the way she talks to he dad sounds more like the words of a ten year old, or a girl that is retarded. This makes it worse yet.
Very good very good very good,
This is not considered rape so that one idiot can,
SHUT THE FUCK UP,
Thank you for your time.
If that had been my daughter I would have licked and sucked her pussy first to get her boyfriends cum, then fuck her and eat her out again, I love sucking on a pussy thats just been filled with cum.
He should have layed her on a counter and fucked her with his tounge really fast! I also think maybe it would have made me even more wet reading this If he would have maybe picked her up while his hard cock was still deep inside her asshole then walked to the couch and let her sit on it while he forced her to grind her hips in repeated circular motions and bounce hard on it making every single inch of her daddys cock fill her ass.
Thanks for this hot story. I wish Daddy had come in her instead of in her mouth! I agree with the other commenters that proofreading would've cut out the errors in your submission. Good effort though!
if you don't like the story, move on!!!
I loved it and only wished he would have spread her legs and licked her hot pussy :) he knew how much she liked his fingering her. He got her all wet and he knew it. I would have sucked his cock, licked his balls, all of it - he sounded amazing.
Yeah, I am very wet from reading this. I had one hand in my pussy and the other on the keyboard scrolling. Reminded me of when my dad first touched my pussy. It took a little while before I relaxed but after that he made me cum and eventually gave me his cock. Wish I had a daddy to fuck me right now :)
loved the story and fully accept it as fantasy. hope you write many more. i think you've hit a nerve: bad daughter is taught how to be good by the dominant male in her life. i also enjoyed the comments, most of which were in your favor.
I love dad daughter roleplay but I don't like violence and degrading language.
Why is it when it's a mother and son, the son is always 18 or older, but where it's a father and daughter, she's always legally a minor?
You need to proof read because there are many misspelled words and things that are in the wrong context but keep trying. With an imagination like yours I'd like to fuck you. Where do you live and how old are you?
i stayed so wet with my fingers fingers up my cunt reading this story ...thanks for the making me cum so hard
So I guess that means that naughtyson4you is either doing his mommy or his daddy is doing him; yeah, that's classy. Nonetheless, we all just simply cannot wait to read something that you have written, or plagiarized. Oops. Shit for brains.
What a bunch of fucking fanboys you all are. Her story was just okay, short, like she had to be somewhere else. It's obvious you're a bunch of desperate losers hoping she "picks" you as her #1 fan and fucks you. Odds are it's a guy, with a photo of some girl, who spent 10 minutes writing down an idea, and look...he whipped you all into a frenzy. If it weren't for below average people, it would be much harder to be above average, so thank you all.
Fabulous, and you are correct- I have 3 daughters, and a 10 year old grand daughter who is begging me to teach her all about sex. But I told her she is too small, so she willl have to wait at least 4 or 5 years.
That was well written. I think we need an ancore! I need a shower to get rid of all the sperm I ejaculated on me.
Left me soaking wet. Daddy chose the perfect punishment, for his bad girl. He should have cum in her pussy though.
Wish I had a daddy like tht,instead of the uncle I had.
Want to hear more.
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Anonymous dated 11/10/12 i want to be your daddy
Not bad, ignore the nasty bitches, How about you learn to not be an ass anon below. I never understude why just because the story was not for them people have to be such rude assholes. Get over yourselves, better yet lets see your prize winning story since you think you can do better, oh wait that right YOU DO NOT HAVE ONE.
This wouldn't give a stiffy to a prison lifer. Yawn, suck. Yawn, fuck. Yawn, the obligatory anal. Right out of the Big Little Book of Shitty Pr0n. Learn to write, will you?
O M G .. I jerked my cock imaging it was me fucking her tight virgin cunt. I shot my load all over the carpet.. MORE PLEASE..
I wish I had a daddy to discipline me.. I'm always being bad and I don't have a daddy to spank me
i was jacking off to this story.i was along at home.my daughter come back home i didn't here her wolk in.i was abote to cum when i seen her wheth no cloth on she got dowe on her knees and suck my dick,till i cum in her mouth and swolowed it all done.she sade dad i wont you to fuck your daughter pussy cum deep in me .i tolled her i mite get you pregnat and you are 15 thaths not right .she is still sucking my dick theths isn't right daughter.she climed on my and put my dick in her wet pussy and tolled me she was horney for me .i hoped you would fuck me before dad i tide to get you when i was 13 i wolk in on you naked that time and mine more times. she cum all over my dick, she was fucking me haeded and saying cum in me cum in me daddy yes dad that cum cum deep in my pussy dad i love your cum in me dad she still fucking me she wouldn't stop fuck me for 6hrs i cummed in her 17 time in her tight pussy.she ask me if she could still fuck me some more dad and get some more of your hot cum in me.yes you can .dad i wont you to get me pregnat ok i'll not say no to you as you late me fuck you eney time i wont to cum in you ok daughter .dad i wont you to cum in me at list 4,5 times a day or more ok i will.
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I couldnt help but let my pussy get soaked while reading this~
God, I want a Daddy~
Loved it....my pussy is wet....Daddy needs to suck, lick and squeeze those juicy ripe titties and pinch, pull and twist her nipples....sweet nipple ache! Little ass slapping would be fun too....spank her pussy and pinch her nipples for being a naughty girl!
that was so hot! my pussy is soooo wet rightnow! i wish my dad would do that to me!
Came so hard reading this story. I love dirty talk...and to all who think the daddy is creepy---ridiculous! It's an incest story, and a hot one at that too. It's not a love sort, it's dirty, nasty, and she ends up wanting him and she loves it. I wish my daddy did this to me...I love how he makes her tell him what she did.
Thank you for the story. My pussy was soaked by the end of the story. I love Daddy stories....
This was so dirty. Made me cum sooo hard. My pussy is drippingggg
Daddy was a little bit creepy but the story was still sexy. I'd appreciate a sequel or two.
Daddy was a little bit creepy but the story was still sexy. I'd appreciate a sequel or two.
This was a great story all around. Mind you, I agree with the other comment in that the typos kind of slow down the momentum. For the next story, do a quick spell check. Look forward to the next one!
I have an internet girlfriend who I have shared erotic stories with.... One day she told me there was only one thing missing.... and it was her desire to be fucked by her daddy.... Since then, I became daddy and she became mylittle girl... and she loves everything your story included.... I call her my little slut....my cock whore.. I fuck her pussy mouth until I cum in her throat... and she orgasms over and over just reading my words..... This was wonderful...
Great story! I really enjoyed it. However, you have many typos that could have easily been fixed if you proof read this story. The typos always grab my attention and somewhat ruin the story for me. Good job overall and thanks for this submission.
Great job! Outstanding! This story left me so horny, I'm practically dripping my juices all over the seat, hehe. Please do write a sequel! ;)
absoulutely so accurately portrays the power and control that sex has in our beings....anymore or less would have been a disappointment!
I loved the content of your story, but you ought to have someone edit spelling and grammar next time.
I enjoyed this story. I came a couple of times! Remind me of when my dad had dominated my pussy licking, fingering, kissing, sucking and tongue fucking my then virgin pussy!
so hot! I have a video!
What a fantastic story oh god yes to have a daddy like that i wish!!!!!! wonderful story
I have a story that is so close about my daughter Jenny. She was also 18 and thought she could do as she pleased living under my roof, I had to punish her too. The difference being she was the one who thought fucking her daddy would gain her more freedom, but it made me want to keep her home more!
Chris wantxtcnow@yahoo.com
this is the first comment I have ever left. This story was quick and hot and straight to the point. I came so hard reading this story it was so hot. I hope you write more it was soo good!
Very hot fic, best daddy fic I've read in a while...I am a woman and not offended by the fic. I can read and have all the basic skills needed to survive...I was able to read what the fic was about. Don't worry about illiterate fools that have noting better to do with their life than come on to a erotic fiction site to bash erotic fiction.
Thank you soooo much for the fic, very hot.
this is my 1st comment on a sex story but idea of someones dad funcking them makes me so horny i wish i have a dad like that .... there should be more about the pussy e.g. licking,rubbing,fingering all that stuff
keep writting
.... love miss anouymous
This was a very good story; I'm involved with a man 2x my age (I'm 25, he's 50) and he's my "Daddy." This story is us to a T, including the dominant factor.
Keep writing...and just do spell check once in awhile. :)
I really enjoyed your story. Im a female and was not shocked to see the genre because I am literate and know what the category clearly labled "incest" means. Incest in real situations makes me sad and not hot...good thing this is a fantasy, probably why its called fiction. Im sorry people dont know the difference. Thanks for the hot FICTION.
I have read quite a bit of the stories on this site - and this is the first one I am leaving a comment on - It got me off good (I am a woman). Keep writing - loved this one!!
I love it when daddy tells me what to do. She always had the choice to say no and never did. Proving she wanted it and needed it. She wasn't a virgin, she was already doing the boyfriend. Loved your story, it made me so wet when daddy told her what to do and she loved doing it.
Forget the crazy comments that left a zero rating. This story is short, hot, and to the point. It's the perfect daddy/daughter fantasy.
That was really well done! A few spelling or grammatical errors, but it was definately hot! Keep up the good work!
Oh, and by the way, I'm a chick and I like every aspect of sex, even anal. So those those previous comments are pretty much worthless, in my eyes, dun even pay attention ;)
You have to keep writting, that was the best I've read in ages! Daddy claiming her, great. Just, I think he needs to come in her, and maybe add just a little bit of spanking, she was kind of naughty. The boyfriend could have been mad and just left her there. Dad could have pulled her into his car. More, please.
Then you have succesfully met the objective of this site... I thought your story was a delightful fantasy for a girl having Daddy sex..... I also thought it was written pretty well.. the writing did interfere with the sex at all!
It must have well written... the trolls seemed to believe it all! (I have no idea why they are reading these stories if the concept is so appalling to them!)
So close your eyes... gently play with yourself and give us another story soon.....
Thank you!
-Would be Daddy
This story is fucking hot. It made me come all over the place. Keep writing, I'd love to hear what happens next.<BR>
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Oh and for all of you that are outraged by different aspects of it, let me just say this. If you are offended by incest stories, then don't read them. If you are bothered about fantasies of forced sex, don't read them. If you don't like anal sex, stop reading! I'm a woman who enjoys anal sex and reading about it. The men I've been with are not gay, although at least one has been bi, and they like anal too! Regarding forced sex, yeah in real life it's wrong, but HELLO, these are fantasies! They're not real. I actually checked with a woman therapist who works w/ rape victims and she confirmed rape fantasies are quite common and as long as they STAY FANTASIES are harmless.<BR>
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So all of you out there, remember this whole site is about fantasies and get over yourselves.<BR>
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Kasey18, your story is hot and you should write more.
hopefully it was just a story. but it was a good story at best. i hope it was your step-dad at least. esme
Finding an excuse to force a daughter into a sex act is RAPE. He should be de-balled ASAP
ruined when you were so close to cumming her pussy..but you pulled out and had to fuck your daughters ass. Your first time being with her and you opt for her ass. to me..just another story where the writer is expressing he is either bi or gay. (gay most likely) I laugh at how many writers hide behind these categories instead of just going to the gay/bi section and getting what they really only want.ass.