All Comments on 'A Daughter Belongs to her Daddy'

A asshole in a butt. , But is but not now, was to short to get me off I gave you a 2 star some type-o too try again

I have looked more at my daughter more now and her school girl friend

Awesome! I look at my cute girl now wishing

I think I came! That's what I think! ...well...actually I DID! CUM!!! a boatload! of sweet white hot faggot sperm!!! 💋👗💋👗💋at the thought of my Daddy pounding the faggot whore cunt of my shelleyness! OMG!!! FUCK me PREGNANT! Daddy! Please! Please! Breed your Shelleyfagslut ...PREGNANT!!! Shelley's daddy's faggot whore for LIFE, baby. FOREVER!!! 👗💋👗💋

not bad, youll get better with time, with a little more detail. you had me hard, wishing i could do just like that with my daughter

Kacey, you're only 18 when this was written I assume. Don't take the shitty criticism to heart, your First story wasn't bad, there are plenty of things to learn as you grow as a writer, whatever genre you choose. Keep at it, come back and embellish this story, write a new one, try a boyfriend / girlfriend one instead. Daddy Daughter stories are probably the most favored, seconded only to Mother /Son, you choose which you want more exposure from, but study writing more. Good luck.

I liked it but it could Definitely use more pages.

That was just really stupid. Written by a dumb teenager?

Meh pretty trash. Could have been hotter if she hadn't been wasted on some random guy in the car and who knows how many others. Just typical slut daughter and perv father. Average at best.

That was just kind of stupid.

It's actually better when they are in their twenties and older.

A great storyline, just a pity that the piece was not proofread and edited, spelling, vocabulary and grammatical errors in abundance.

The story was good. The author needs a good editor to help develop their story line, correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. I would be willing to help if requested to do so.

Oddly enough the name of the character father in this is the name of one of my ex fellow employee who got both are female bosses pregnant with twins there both due on Christmas Day so we had a Christmas themed double baby shower I’m dating my one bosses daughter

Anonymous from 22 days ago make me think you’re the guy that Ron White always talks about

Disgusted me that he put in her mouth what he already put her ass. That's gross. Especially knowing she probably didn't wash the last time she went to the bathroom and just wiped. Hello amoebiasis!

I want a daddy to send videos of me fucking myself too

I want a daddy to fuck me so hard

If you wanna watch me fuck myself

Orose5546 on Snapchat

A good story with an bad execution. I counted an awful lot of spelling and grammar errors in this.

Lovely story💦

I'm dripping... And missing my Daddy.

Everything perfect, like my Daddy who takes control and possesses me

As soon as he headed for her rear end, I was out. Not my thing. Particularly when she was reluctant.

Pathetic

wish it was me when i was younger

made me feel it was me.

Great Ending! Love Ass to Mouth Stories...Hopefully it was based on Kasey18's Experiences...

Comments by Anonymous about the spelling mistakes is uncalled for.

More physical punishment and more build up

so nice having a hand in their panties fingering a nice wet teen pussy

A naughty teen girl with Daddy issues always makes a nice story. They have a good thing going on between them. I loved it. Make her beg for it, Daddy!

I want a girl who would roleplay with me as this is just one of many scenarios i would like to try and the only part missing is Daddy getting to Taste and savor his girl and make her come when and how he wants and gets to make her a squirter as almost every woman i have been with in last decade i have been able to turn her into a squirting slut as one could only get off on multiple men after me as she said she got spoiled from cumming so much one man would not be enough and she had Never met a guy who could eat her for hours and make her cum a dozen plus times in a night. Cum to this Daddy and let him show you

Poorly written story with a lot of mistakes in spelling. How was this allowed to be posted with so many mistakes?

Talel81

Start by doing a sexy message until she relaxes, then kiss her neck and keep kissing down her legs and keep her pussy till last.

That might help.. to start off

Write your sex story on here.. if it's a success

Came hard to this story and now I’m hard again reading these comments. Wish I could fuck my stepdaughter. She walks around the house all day in tight clothes and short shorts. Drives me crazy seeing her like that. I want to go into her room every night and claim her; teach her how to please a man periphery. Anyone who reads this have any tips hit me up.

Daddy's spunk tastes the best

Brutal Dad makes his wastrel daughter suck his cock and let him do her pussy and ass before cuming all over her face. What a worthless Dad.

It felt weird... talking like a preteen girl, and acting like one... all because of above 18 rule...

I enjoyed your story and hope to see more. You have a gift to share with the dirty old men of the world.

I like this. It was well written and I enjoyed every part. Nothing better than Daddy and daughter sex tbh lol. I love to drive to my Daddys work on his lunch break, and since I have tinted windows, I get naked in the back seat and ready for him to jump in and start eating his lunch hehe. I def take care of him too, we don't stop making the vehicle shake until he fills me with his sexy Daddy cum. Today tho, we get to spend several hours alone together, in my bed, uninterrupted lol. I'm so excited right now, and kitty is throbbing! 😇

they love sitting on daddys lap with his hand in their knickerswhile they rub his cock

You need to develop a bit of a story. Finding to really hard to believe there were so ma y women that admitted to being sooo wet after just so few paragraphs. I think you can do much better than this, and with that I say good luck. You write like a teen age boy that has little imagination . Have to admit the photograph is great.

My daddy and I attended a wedding out of town and we stayed in a motel room that had two beds. After the wedding we went to the reception and I danced and had a few drinks. After awhile I was tired and told daddy that I was going to go to the room and lay down. He told me that he would see me later.

I got to the room and got undressed leaving my bra and panties on and got under the covers.

Sometime later i was awakened when I heard the door open.

Daddy came over to my bed and sat down. I could smell alcohol on his breath as he began to get undressed. I turned away from him and was facing the wall.

I thought that he was just sitting on my bed so he could get undressed then he'd get in his bed.

The next thing I knew I felt the covers being pulled from my body and the bed was shaking. My daddy was getting into bed with me.

My eyes flew open and I didn't know what to say or do.

I was laying on my side and he moved close to me. He put his arm over me and I froze in fear. I hoped that he would go to sleep but he had other ideas

I felt his hand graze my left breast and then it settled on my breast and he pinched my nipple making me shudder.

He moved closer to me and I could feel his cock touching my ass.

Now I was really scared of what he was doing.

He moved his head so he was touching my ear and I could feel his hot breath on my ear.

He moved his hand from my breast to the waistband of my panties and slipped it under the material until he was touching the slit of my pussy.

Daddy no I told him. Please don't do this to me. I'm your daughter. Please it's not right for you to touch me like this

He didn't stop. Instead he pulled my panties down and I could feel the head of his cock at the entrance to my vagina.

PLEASE STOP I CRIED

He pushed his cock inside of me filling me up with the girth of his cock and to my shame I pushed back at him getting as much as I could inside of me until he was touching my cervix and uterus with his cock

Oh daddy I cried. Your fucking me. Your fucking your daughter

He still hasn't said anything. He just was pushing his cock deep inside of me and to my shame I began to meet him stroke for stroke touching places inside of me that had never been touched

I felt his cock expand and he grunted and pushed hard inside of me and shot his potent seman deep inside of me coating my overies with his seman

If I was ovulating I was pregnant and I knew it but with that big cock buried deep inside of me I didn't care if I got pregnant or not

It just felt so good to have his cock in my cunt

We fucked two more times before morning and he came inside of me both times

Needless to say that when you play with fire you're going to get burned.

After returning home from the wedding I missed my period and I knew that I was pregnant with my daddy's baby.

i never didthat to my daughter but iloved how theirstory turned out. its been on my mind that shed let me. id be very gentle first time. holly is very pretty

One day I saw my daughter playing with a boy, he grabbed her boob, and she laughed shamelessly. that night I want to teach a lesson. her mom was not at home, she went to her parents place. my daughter is very innocent, I invite her to my bedroom, she slept on my lap. I asked her what she did with the boy, she frightened

Told me that she did nothing but the boy was put his hand on her boob, I was very angry, remove your dress, get naked, suck my cock, I told her, she obeyed my word, that night I fucked her 3 times. she happily allowed me to fuck,

Goed geschreven en heerlijk verhaal.! Als vanouds samen onder de douche en ik zeepte zijn schat voor eerst met mijn handen en voelde hem groeien. Ik voelde voor het eerst tussen mijn beentjes dat mijn lipjes zijn gezwollen hardheid omvatten. Dit was het begin van onze echte liefde. Mama verliet ons voor een ander en ik draag nu onze tweede baby in mij van mijn man/vader

Mandy G.

A good Daddy should use every hole thoroughly. That’s why daughters were made. It was beautiful that he made her try atm. I’m sure this is the start of a beautiful relationship.

I love daddy and 18+ daughter stories, this one really got me wet especially the part of being watched, caught and made to confess, oh my did this make my button buzz, that was until daddy got bad. I wanted to grab his dick at this point and chop the fucking thing off, a good imagination brought this story to a lovely ending. I so want to be 18 again and go back and do to my daddy what I should have done all those years ago. I was safe then Daddy never hurt me x

my daddy loves to fuck me wherever i am, in the kitchen, shower, bed, car, changing rooms or at the beach. he loves the pump his big cock in my tight pussy and cum inside me. my mommy likes to join in sometimes. so does my brother. my brother likes to double penetrate me with daddy and fuck me so hard i cant walk. i love my family fucking

I am hoping you might add more, you made me cream and my husband so hard, we love stories like this.

Thanks Annie

As a young lady, I was the only female living with my dad and older brother. Both of them had huge thick cut cocks. Dad was very interested in having sex with me, but I was less interested because of the awkwardness, and I was afraid of him hurting me with his big dick and filling me with his sperm. As an alternative, I would learn to jack him off and watch his big sperm geyser explode all over me and himself!

I barely got past the first paragraph...My mind was wondering how the hell trees can 'Lull" over a parking lot...Lull means to pause....so...right off the bat I'm disappointed....If it wasn't important enough for you to start the story without the

totally weird use of a word...I couldn't get any further...sorry....

My stepfather eats my pussy until I cum all over his face I love sucking his huge cock he cums a lot in my mouth

Damn hot... wish the you had more stories about them Kasey18. Anyone know if user has different profile with more tales of the little slut and her daddy?

Loved it thanks for the story

I just found this little tale again I do wish you were still around.

Oh my did i start humping my pillow wishing my daddys cock was available for my tongue

I just recently started having sex with my step-dad. I think I’m going to have him read this and see if we can’t act it out. Right now he mostly eats my pussy but I’m ready for anal I think.

@Anonymous (01/12/18)

If you're so annoyed by tiny details, then don't read.

Honestly, if you're going to make so many typos than just don't write a book. It gets really annoying for those of us who have eyes for details.

I gave a three for effort but a little harsh for me. I guess there will always be those that like to read the rough controlling first time sex NO matter with whom it's with........

I couldn't help but think of my Daddy & I... Ugh!!!!

First, re read and edit the typos.

Second, a different ending. Daddy knock on car window at the parking lot and send boy home. Daughter tell daddy everything in the car, not at home. Daddy takes daughter in car. She rest her head against him, naked, dripping as he drive them home saying the last line.

When my parents separated I let my daddy fuck mu tight pussy every weekend. Daddies cock is the best. I will give him my wet pussy forever.

I always dream about this. So exciting to me. If you have this experience please email me. I love to hear all

I like reading about father / daughter stories but this one was terrible.

The spelling was awful as well as the story.

It was just about a lot of nothing. Totally unbelievable

If you want to write about stories like this then you should read what you write and you'll see what I'm talking about

I REALLY like this story....Kinda.....Try to use spell-check sweetie ^~^

I've had sex with my nieces on multiplications they all came to me one but I want to have sex and I have been given the every night l had a birthday yesterday and their present to me all three at one time I only wish I had a daughter that would love to have My cock in her

Good start keep writing gawd I wish I had a daughter like this made me cum keep up the good work

Hope daddy keeps filling his lil slut with cock

Not very exciting perhaps give it another go.

Gave you a 5 because of hot content...grammar and spelling need to improve. Keep writing. Maybe do a sequel to this story.

this reminds me of hen my daddy first took me. apart from the fact he didn't just rape me, he made me feel loved and horny, now we live together in London as a couple

Another father rapes daughter story. In short, it's a sick, twisted, stupid, and completely implausible story with nothing sensual, stimulating, or believable about it; except to a weak or, warped mind.

this is great I wish my daddy would fuck me, I set him see me naked all the time and I see his cock from time to time and it makes me wish we were alone so I could get him to take me like this daddy took his daughter.

You didn't write much in the way of good reading. Instead you wrote of rape and sadistic acts of a father on his daughter.

Please, go take a remedial English course.

Wish i had a Daddy to fuck me hard like that...i am so horn after reading this.

Just like me and my stepdaughter.After a young boy left her still horny and not cumming daddy taught her what a good fuck and sucking session really is like.I wish you had gave more details of what her body looked like, my girl has long dark hair big tits and a sweet hairy pussy.She loves to swallow loads and even eat daddy ass.

Wishing I had daddy that did this to me...anyone up to it?

Come fuck me daddy

My daddy fucks me everyday so hard that i can't even sit... Ughhh i want more. Fuck me FUCK ME MOW

Im so hard who can i fuk

Great store I love fucking my baby girl she was 13 when she asked me to teach her about sex now she's 17 I'm the only man to ever fuckher

I'm sorry but its cum not come

don't stop , don't stop! Oh fuck me harder. 5 for effort and content .

That was basically ass rape, she told him to stop! Your spelling and grammar is the worst by the way.

God this made me so wet

I want my daddy and his brothers to fuck me like a whore

I am 13... Read this... And I want my daddy to destroy my pussy now. Him and all of his friends. Just take turns all of them touching and grabbing me at once...

The only thing that annoyed me was him fucking her in the ass with no lube and playing it off like it didn't hurt her .. That would have fucked her up and she would have been bleeding and possibly torn and needed stitches.big dicks in tiny asses with no lube is bad juju!!

I liked it, I pictured the daddy to be a sort of noble man and maybe of the church.

The girl in my mind had black pig tails and a catholic Skool uniform on. And it wasn't a fucking book of like 8 pages to blow with the main chapters, don't get me wrong, long is good, when u got time.

Great story . Keep writing

🤘

Love it more cum tho the dad is an ass

You should write more stories! This was HOT!!! :)

I gave my daddy my pussy for Fathers Day. While Mum was cooking a roast lunch for us, I sucked daddies cock, then I rode him until he came, deep inside me. Daddy likes it when I were my old school uniform.....

Would have loved to have had my Daddy fuck me. This is a hot, hot story but the editing errors take a bit away from it.

My fantasy and every other girl's fantasy.......to be fucked by her father. A great story that fulfills a girl's need to be loved and sexually used by her dad. In the story, I was her, wanting sex and so very glad my father needed it too.

I started licking and fuck my daughter when she came over on weekends. The first time I think she was 14 maybe 15 not sure. She loved it as much as I did

Loved the story, it made me feel deliciously nasty and uncomfortable as I read it the second time resisting the urge to touch myself.

OMG, I'm wet and soooo achy down there now.

Amazing I wish my dad or brother would fuck me like that sometimes i think my brother is looking at me and he always says ' your tits are really big ' and stuff like that

My daddy and I live together as man and wife. I moved in with him when I enrolled at the university. We started to sleep together shortly after I moved in with him. We had gone out to eat and had a few drinks too many. We got back to the apartment and started making out on the sofa. We ended up in his bed where he took me that night. From then on, we decided to live as man and wife. I am now pregnant and ready to have my father's baby.

"Get on your back.' He demanded.

In a daze I obeyed. Lying on my back he straddled my face.

'I'm going to fill your mouth up with Daddy's come.' He said.

He pushed his cock into my mouth and started fucking my face. It made me incredibly horny all over again. Him in control, forcing his cock into my mouth as fast or slow as he wanted, and again that image of my Daddy's come made me want to scream."

That part alone made me come at least 4 times. I love it when daddies straddle their daughters face. Some of the commentors are crying rape, oh how I wish his daughter was raped. I would love to read a story about a daughter who is raped by her father and doesn't love it by the end. I LOVE reading about dads that fuck their daughters, daughters who didn't want it, forcing their little daughters to take their dick in their mouths, ass and pussy. This story was a good one. Thank you.