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Click here"OH GOD! OH FUCK!" She screamed. "OH GOD! ALEC! OH FUCK! YES!!!!!!"
He roared his release pounding into her as his seed flowed into her womb; her release bringing on his almost immediately. He shook uncontrollably with the force of his orgasm and shuddered as the last vestiges of pleasure coursed through him. He could feel her shudder beneath him and groaned. He collapsed on top of her and turned them both on their sides so he didn't crush her.
He was overwhelmed. Their eyes had never closed. He had seen every emotion that had passed through her; aware that she had seen every emotion that had passed through him. He understood that he had seen her most vulnerable self as she had seen his; knew that's why she had called out his name instead of daddy.
Their eyes finally closed as their lips met in a gentle, tender kiss. His heart pounded against his chest. He placed a hand on her chest and could feel her heart pounding too. Words escaped him. There was no way for him to describe this moment. He wasn't the writer, but even if he had been, he didn't know if there were words for what had just passed between them.
He lifted her leg high on his hip again. He wasn't flaccid yet. He knew he should pull out, but he didn't want to. He wanted, no, needed to have this connection to her for just a while longer. He held her closer as if he could make her a part of him; wondering somehow if she wasn't there already. He buried his face in her neck and gave himself up to exhaustion. They would both have a lot of think about in the morning.
Sorry for the name foul-up on my last comment. Switch Elise (daughter) for Leslie. My bad.
OK, where to start. Do people really pass out from sex? I don't really think so. Why the need for the tears by all parties? I can't believe that someone as hard-case as Culver and his daughter would hardly break down and shed a tear when confronted. And why did Culver seem to instantly cave? He would undoubtedly pull out all the stops and fight back tooth and nail. Also, I suspect he has video of Leslie and dear old Dad going at it in dad's office. That would certainly obviate the incest bias Leslie perceived from the judge. Speaking of Leslie; considering all of the animus she supposedly held towards Dad, why would she simply crumple the instant he knocked on her door (unannounced). Since she was living in a penthouse don't they have any lobby check in security? Oh well. On to the next chapter . . . .
So he abandons her (as far as she knows), and then he just shows up at her door and is immediately able to charm his way into her pants? It was a great story up until that part.
OH. MY. GOD. This whole storyline is AMAZING!! I can’t even begin to describe what this story did to me! Oh my god this is so fucking hot!!
Personally, I think this is a good place to end the story. You've tied up your plot, destroyed the villains, rewarded the protagonist, and I don't see where else you could take it without destroying Elise's integrity.